You can refer to phrases below for doing your corrections.
- colourful striped tents and awnings
- fear and trepidation rose in my heart
- overwhelmed with anxiety, I jostled with the crowd searching for my brother
- my throat was hoarse and parched as a result after shouting his name continuosly
- petrified with fear among a sea of strangers
- my face lit up as the crease of worry vanished instantly